Is it weird that the first word that comes to mind after following along with the score & video audio is the word "Adorable"? 🤣
Reason for that is because of how much your score represents a personal notebook. I like it when people use their own little phrases and staff notes to indicate what to do. Often times, it's even easier for another player to read and play along with it that way.
Being someone who's a bit of a perfectionist with the work I write, Personally, I'd have notated the articulations, dynamics, tempo, and used music terms for some of the areas that you have notes marked at.
But that's just my personal take on it. You've clearly got your own style mastered, and I applaud you for that, Jackie! Very well done performance, and a pretty lookin' score, to boot! 🙂