Hi there, Tunndy!
Long time no see!
You have made a wonderful effort into this orchestration, and have an intricacy I am not in the mood of describing, because it is unbelievably intricate.
I like the harp solo-ish part very much, and also the section right after that! There are both very smart.
By the ending the polyrhythms are also very good.
Compared to the previous attempts of orchestration, you have improved a lot. I see you have taken some of the advice from people or, at least beings such as me or @PeterthePapercomPoser.