Great work.
There are brilliant parts and some very original arrangements.
However, I think that at times it is too literal with respect to the original song, which isn't bad, it's just a matter of taste.
The introduction is very good, distributing the melody between the strings and the winds.
I think the first verse forgets this dialogue a little and relies heavily on the strings, which then move to another level but continue to carry the melody.
There are some tessituras that I think are unnecessarily out of place, if they are even possible to play effectively (double basses in 29 and 30).
There are also several instances where the strings split into several notes and it is unclear whether they are double-triple stops or divisi.
I also find it strange to see the piccolo and flute in unison, with the former in a very low register.
In conclusion, I see a huge amount of work that sounds good. But orchestrating is not easy, and the orchestra you have chosen is quite large.