Thanks for looking at this!
Pieter, your comments are much appreciated. I'll remove the braces and pedal notation. The octave at measure 10 is an 8vb, so an octave lower, but you are right that it is awkward; I should probably just switch staves for that section.
An mp3 is attached. Please note a few things: the software can't insert, for example, the breath (the pause) between measure 69 and 70, where there should be silence for about 3/4 of a second or so. Also, the other standard things apply about odd arpeggios, volumes, speeds, etc...
== Edit ==
Thanks for the suggestion; link added :
http://www.box.net/shared/95y9oamqi3