Thank you for the responses.
@jrcramer cant really answer the questions you ask at the end other than giving a vague one like; I want to learn everything I can! and I can point out my own personal problems about the work, but its purely for subjective reasons. I want to know what others think about, so they can point out flaws I cant hear.
@notlagj yea those clunky chords are something i am trying to run away from, this work is actually alot less clunky than the previous ones I made. It might be because Im studying counterpoint and using my left hand more than usual.
I glad you guys found it interesting. I dont know about posting any new works though, So I will just listen intill the time is right.