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Thanks alot for reply. Can u tell me where exactly I must post my song for review next time. Feel kinda lost..

I am a beginner composer. I tried compose a Indian song using Fl studio. I just sing using the a cheap mic. Regarding my composition I feel there is alot of mistakes. Sometimes I could not see it properly as I hear more it become normal for me. I would like to ask help of you guys to comment and advice on this composition so I can correct it. Also please see is it the beat(drum) I choose is suitable for this song. Thanks. http://www.woofiles.com/dl-277001-ImQbe29K-A.MogaanLessaParvai2.mp3