Thank you all for your comments and thank you montpellier for pointing out the faults in the intervals. I had only just learned about the rules of species counterpoint, as Qccowboy mentioned, so I guess I should have been more careful about the ones regarding the intervals between each part. Aerlinndan, I will take your suggestion of focusing on actual counterpoint and just work with small peices until I can get a better understanding of it. Again, thank you all.