Appreciate the feedback! I can respect the straightforwardness of the feed back and so far I've gotten mostly positive responses! I think this could be a case where a piece just didn't do it for some people but does for others! As far as the musical analysis of the progression I definitely wanted to bring in some metal influence to the piece but nothing is above revision. Looking back on the track with fresh eyes I can see a few things I need to change but all in all I am definitely pleased with the overall composition it became. I'm going to expand on the transitions and post again! I hope you'll give it another shot when I do! But if not, I appreciate the time you took to comment. Cheers!