Thanks again for the feedback...it's good to see a variety of responses to my music. It's actually helpful. It is titled as a prelude and was going to be followed by a larger piece; however, it ended being much longer than I originally intended, so I may just leave it as is.
The piece IS meant to be somewhat chaotic; that's just my style. I don't like things to get too predictable. That being said however, I do agree with aerlinndan and Matusleo as well. I would like to learn more form and structure, if nothing else, for my own edification. That way, if I do decide break any "rules" of form and theory, at least I'll have a basis of knowledge from which to work (rather than going entirely by intuition).
So...do any of you have suggestions on good books to start with?
Thanks.