JBmusic

very wonderful music! It's very emotional and touching...great job in writing such a moving piece.

I really liked the melody of the piece...all I can say is that I wish I could write piano parts like you!;) Also, I play violin and this sounds like a very fun piece to play...pull the music out of the air and let it flow types.

I liked the way you worked your music up. Your use of rythems was great and your mixture of instuments also contributed a lot to the piece. It was very interesting and I think it would be a fun piece to play.

Okay...well, I don't really know what to say, I've listened to it three times and each time I think to myself, wow. I also really enjoyed the intensity of the piece, but I don't really have the skill to say anything more. P.S. You write so well, is this what you do for a living? Sorry for breaking into your privacy, but I really enjoy your music.

Great, I got it to work, but I don't have time to reply so I'll talk when I do...just for starters though, I liked it a lot.

I also think that the rest between phrases are too long, but that is easily remedied. I really enjoyed the chords and such, nice job there...Oh, and the piano at the end...it was actually cool sounding, I would consider incorporating the piano into the piece. Overall, it needs work--not that I really have any right to say that!--but it could develop into a very nice piece of music.

Very good music...I really enjoyed listening to it. I don't know to explain my thoughts about the piece very well, but I just wanted to tell you that I really liked it! :)

Well...I kind of liked the first part of the piece--the melody was cool--but the end was extremely dull and LONG! But great job on the melody part...I would consider adding more to the piece and incorporating some more layers.

I agree, I found it kind of hard to decipher the "concerto" part of the piece.

I want to listen to your piece, but for some reason I can't get your mp3 to open!:angry: Sorry, I just needed to vent...do any idea why I can't open this?

I really liked the way you brought the music out, but I think you could have maybe created a better climax...but it depends on YOUR feelings of the piece, not mine. Overall, it was very beautiful music. Nice Job:)

Finally, another person my age! I actually play violin in orchestra so I don't know much about band other than what I have shown myself--but about the 8va in strings, go ahead, use it, we get it all the time! To your piece, I liked it for what it was, lots of chords! I thought it sounded nice, though it would obviously sound much better live--do you play in band? If you do, you should get your directed to run through your piece, you'll hear things that you have never heard before. Overall, good job on the arranging thing...and I wouldn't worry much about the copyright thing right now.

Very fun song to listen to! I really enjoyed the melody, it's still playing through my head! Also, I really liked the chords that you used around the middle of the piece. I think it would be a fun song to play. Another thing that I really thought was cool was the way that you led the music back into the beginning melody after all the slow stuff in the middle. Overall, a very enjoyable piece--it makes me want to go practice writing some more so I can write something fun like this!:D

Maybe more rhythm on the bass line...but other wise I liked it and that it was truly a "forest" theme.

I have absolutely nothing to say! I don't really have very much compositional training and therefore am not very much value to you, but I just want to congratulate on such a cool piece. Also, the ending didn't seem that out of place to me, actually, I liked it. Another thing that I liked was your use of rhythms, I think that it would be a fun song to play.;)