Thank you all for your comments ! I really appreciate them, like I said I'm kinda beginning there's still much to improve. I've been studying composition officially since a year and a half ago, but I've been dabbling in composition since I began taking piano lessons at the time I was about 10 years old.
I used finale 2014, but the piano sound is actually a pianoteq demo version. The music font is Gutenberg for finale, I found it for free on elbsound.studio, and the text font I think Strassburg Fraktur on dafont, also free. Used it because it was a gift and I wanted the score to look more gift-like(?) xP
Thanks especially maestrowick for your suggestions 2) yes, I see how a quintuplet would feel more natural.
3) you're right, I'm not sure about the repeating d's in m. 5, but I can't seem to come up with a better idea.
4)This, I don't know what you mean could you clarify ?
5) yes, subito f
6) good idea !
7) you're right also
Although I don't see myself necessarily expanding the piece, I'll surely fix some of the things pointed out. But I'm definitely posting soon when I finish a new piece, thanks aagain for your comments finding out about this forum has been amazing
