I really appreciate your feedback! @Ken320 I actually kind of lied about me not ever composing as I did "compose" a 20 second cadenza with my teachers help in 3rd grade, but I still have a lot to learn. I don't understand why writing it as you mentioned would make it better, as it is the same thing, so some explanation would be nice. @fishyfry Will do, I have never tried to sing it or play it on my oboe but I think it should help make my piece better.