Hi Adrian Quince, and thank you! I'd say the three things I like most are that I think I achieved a pretty out-there sound while maintaining musicality on some level, I like my use of repeated motifs, and I think I achieved a certain level of contrast (between pizzicato and arco, forte and piano, chords and single notes, high and low notes, etc.). I would like to improve on my use of rhythm, my ability to create an emotional arc that is both complex and successful/coherent, and my ability to create an introduction that both sets up the rest of the piece and is interesting in itself.
Hi Maarten Bauer, and thank you for your feedback! I was trying to play around with lack of structure in this composition but wasn't sure if I had used it successfully, so your thoughts on that are helpful.
