Bjarke

Hello dear people. I have composed a new compostion and i would appreciate it very much if I could get some critique on the composition, anything you notice is vaild and some points I would like critique on it this: The cohesiveness of the piece, how well the piece creates tension for example, if it feels like the piece have "bumps" where it feel like it goes off. How well I exsecute the harmonic progressions and cinematic feel. The composition is influenced by Thomas Bergersen whom I listen to a lot these days. Like pretty much on a daily basis. Thanks so much in advance

Hello everyone. Hope's everyone is doing well. I finally have a new composition after working on it for a while. Feel free to critique anything you notice. Thanks in advance. flight dorico.pdf

I figured instead of posting them seperately which might make too many posts (spam) I thought it may be best to post them in one topic. Here is my lates compositions from the last 24 hours. '

Here is an other attempt at composing for piano and viola. I think it took me 2-3 hours to compose roughly. Any feedaback as always is highly welcomed and appriciated. Thanks.

Thanks everyone for your feedbacks and compliments! @PeterthePapercomPoser Actually regarding the picture it might be but i can't comfirm as it was really just some random picture which i found on a website i can download image for free xD This speed composition i believe took less than 3 hours i believe maybe around 2 hours? I usually do my speed composition in a few hours but if they are longer than 2 minutes it usually require more days. Thanks all again! 🙂

Hope its okay i share a youtube link. I thought it turned out pretty good. Any feedback is highly apreciated as always. Thanks.

Composed this in a few hours. Attempt at trailer music style. Any feedback is much appreciated. Thanks.

Thank you as well @PeterthePapercomPoser 🙂

Thank you so much @Henry 🙂

Hello all. Here is a short composition for Piano and Viola as the title says. This composition is made for two muscian students at my music school i go to which will be performed later this year I think. Title is still in progress. Any feedback is highly appreciated. Thank you. Best regards. Bjarke.

Wow Adamich It's really awesome to see you on the forum I didn't knew you where here too. just to clearify I am focusmrbjarke from youtube and as you know I been following your amazing compositions for some years. It's really amazing to see you here and I hope we can see more of your here if that is what you want 🙂 Welcome back to the forum! All the best. Bjarke.

@Jqh73o Thank you very much for the feedback!

Awesome piano technique! 🙂 some suggestion for improvement perhaps could be sometimes when the melody is highlighted in the high register you could make jumps to double the melody in the bass. I think I have heard that technique somewhere before which I thought was pretty effective. at around 3:00 Perhaps an idea could be which I have seen composers like Liszt do where he starts energy sometimes with a trill but you could also do it the way you did where it will be transformed to a run across octaves (for example la campanella or i think he does this as well in libestrum) This could then be transformaed to a background element. An other way of doing this is perhaps keep what you do in the piece but then repeat it later again modulated perhaps a whole tone above which could create suspension and then add the run. I also think this piece could benefit from more modulation. The harmonies in of it self are interesting but they could add more depth through more modulation. I think that this piece may also be a bit too much minor harmonies and could beneficial with a contrasting section of a major section of course still following the same thematical ideas. I hope this is something you can use. I am really impressive with your composing ability which already feel mature. I think you have a very promising composing future ahead 🙂

Thanks all. Here are some refinements! 🙂

Here is a sketch i am currently working on. Any feedback is much appreciated. Thank you.