Bjarke

I spend a lot of time refining this composition over a period of a few months. Working almost sorely on this piece alone. I also attached the first version of the composition so you can see the difference. Did I make real improvements? Any critique? Thanks in advance. Finale version draft 1War born re composed for orchestra draft 1 20-05-2026 - Flow 1.mp3 First version Like clock work - re write 3 - Flow 1.mp3 warborn revisited finale version.pdf First version Like clock work re write 3 . 18.03.2026.pdf

Hi everyone! Sorry for the double post but here is the orchestartion version :D score.pdfwarborn - orchestra - draft - 7 - 03-05-2026 wip - Flow 1.mp3

Here is an other revised version! Thanks @Kvothe for your feedback :) War born draft 7 simplified, minimal version 2 03-05-2026 - Flow 1.mp3 war born recomposed draft 7.pdf

This is my 16 attempt at drum tracks. Slightly better I think than the previous i made but still room for improvement. Any feedback? Thanks. drum track 16.mp3

I speed composed a short Hanz Zimmer imperssion after listening to the sherlock holmes sound track serval times. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks. zimmer impression no 2 - Flow 1.mp3hanz zimmer impression score.pdf

Thanks again @PeterthePapercomPoser and @Kvothe Here is yet an other refined version where i tryied to re think the repetitions a bit and refined some ideas. War born draft 5 WIP impact 01-05-2026 - Flow 1.mp3war born reimagned draft 5.pdf

Thanks a lot for your comment @Kvothe I re wrote the score with new ideas and tried to improve it with the 9/8 meter. Others have mention it as well and I thought then why not give it a try then? Here is the new re written version. WarBorn complete re write draft 3 03-04-2026 - Flow 1.mp3 Warborn recomposed draft 3.pdf

I am trying to do what some of the late romantic composers did in their time: Keep refining even after a work have been published to improve the piece further. (Mahler, Liszt, Bruckner and others did this) Any critique is welcome. I refined and changed a few sections in the piece even re wrote some parts. While some sections stayed the same. Thanks in advance. revisit warborn work in progress.pdfWarborn version 2 wip re write title 05-04-2026 newest - Flow 1.mp3

At the moment i am practicing to create cinematic drum tracks. My end goal is to be able to create something like All drums goes to hell by Two steps from hell. I am pretty new at this so they aren't that good yet. But i will be happy with any feedback i can get. Thanks in advance. Dragon fire.mp3 drum track 7.mp3 Drum track 9.mp3 drum track 10.mp3 drum track no 8.mp3 epic drums no 6.mp3

It seems very well orchestrated. Not over orchestrated and much clearity. Nice work. May I ask. How long have you been orchestrating for? I am also practicing orchestration but recently took it more serious. My only critique would perhaps be to use more extended techniques maybe? Like harmonics, Divisi, Mutes, Double stops and triple stops etc, play more around with textures maybe. But it's not really necessary. it's really good as is.

The future is here - Bjarke Tan - Flow 1.mp3The future is here score.pdf Here is a speed writing attempt made in one day.

Warborn orchestration draft 3 08-04-2026 - Flow 1.mp3 I orchestrated my piano sketch called "Like a clock work" and re named it to Warborn which i thought where more fitting title. Here is the orchestra version. Thanks in advance.

Thanks a lot for your comment I made a few adjustments in a newer polished version @PeterthePapercomPoser Like clock work version 2.2 05-04-2026 - Flow 1.mp3version 2 refined.pdf

Like clock work version 2.mp3version 2.pdf Hey. Any chances of getting critique on this composition? Thanks in advance. Some personal things i noticed: Overused rhythm – Effective but repetitive; lacks contrast and becomes monotonous. Sections that don’t fit – Some passages sound good on their own but feel disconnected from the main idea. Ideas needing polishing – Certain motifs or sections need refinement so they integrate better into the overall structure and narrative of the piece. Too much tension There is too much tension in the piece. It needs more release here and there. The main lead could be stronger and more interesting The main idea is pretty good but it is repetitive from the first round to the second round. Awkward transitions There is a few places where there are awkward transitions that needs to be fixed. more modulation The piece stays too much within the same key.

Hey. I was wondering if i could have any feedback on this exercise? i really want to up my orchestration skills as i am a bit new to orchestration. Thanks in advance! :) Erik satie Gymnopedie - Arr Bjarke Tan - Flow 1.mp3 Score erik satie.pdf