GrimPanda

Thank you both. I will be incorporating your suggestions. I am having an issue though with extending the piece. I'm not really sure of how to get past this point. I've about 5 sketches for different pieces now, but I have no idea on how I could go about extending them. Should I just repeat with variations? Once I get it going again it wont be difficult to keep it going I am just unsure of how to continue past the end point I made in the sketches. I'd really appreciate some tips.

I have just recently gotten into writing Classical music and this is the first piece I've ever written. I'd like to get some general feedback of what I should look into and how to improve. Please bear with me as those are the built-in soundfonts and aren't the most amazing sounding things in the world.