The synth 16ths that go up and down? or the strings 16ths? Either case, the vst's I used, their samples aren't perfect.. so I was kind of stuck with what I got.. Do you think adding percussion or something in those areas would create more depth and rhythm? And you're right, they pretty much are sections of loops haha.. When I originally wrote it out it was more of a diary of ideas? And then I kind of just started blurring the lines with transitions.. but if you can tell then I guess I didn't do that well at hiding that. But thanks for the critique! Much appreciated!