No, I'm not familiar with Harmonic analysis.
And you would be correct if you doubt my ability to achieve these harmonies.
I stupidly did not write articulation or dynamics and I feel completely stupid.
I would like to thank you for your feedback as it is helping me to get better and improve.
I'm fairly self-conscious and it is hard for me to put music I write up on this forum due to me fearing criticism but in receiving it i feel like i have room to improve and a reason to keep composing.
So, Thank you
Will take into account your advice and upload a revised version with dynamics and breathing spaces etcetera.