Heggel

I like it! I can feel that vibe of missing "something" that doesn't belongs to you. Besides the drums (I can help you with that) and the lack of bass, I would only recommend to add some bends and add more longer notes, in order to give it more feeling. You'll refine it

Amazing! Probably by now, you have a big progress with it and it would be nice to hear it. Now, I would probably go with a breakdown like in this song that occurs from minute 2:14

I like it. Love the melancholic atmosphere. Which software are you using by the way?