Poisonchocolate

Hey, so I'm only a brass player and I love writing music but I have a hard time staying interested when writing music for winds and strings. In my free time I did end up making this chorale I like fairly well, basically adaptations off of the basic melody of Battle Hymn of the Republic. Because of musescore limitations, there are some moments where instruments get very suddenly louder. Any who are more knowledgeable than I am, I'd love to hear suggestions.