Pietro17
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Fantasia per organo pleno in g major
Pietro17 replied to Simen-N's topic in Piano Music, Solo Keyboard
Masterful counterpoint The beginning feels a little like Bach's allabreve in D The mp3 you provided doesn't sound like a real organo pleno and I think it's better that way. Whole piece, which is quite long, played with loud pleno registration can be a little tiring, it's very difficult to play so much of thick texture without it feeling weary for the listener - think of Bach's Fantasia in G major (piece d'orgue), it's not impossible, but difficult. Maybe think about some changes of registrations (like in the middle) to give the listeners moments of less intensity I really admire your counterpoint skills, keep up your great work and please don't stop composing -
This piece was written for me (viola) and my friends (who play violins, double bass and organ) to perform during a christmas concert, that's why the instrumentation is a little strange. Also this was intended as a middle movement of a bigger work - but when the concert was cancelled I gave up writing the other movements Thank you all for your support!
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Christmas adagio movement for string quartet and organ ad libitum. It was originally meant as a middle movement of a Christmas fantasia, but I never wrote the other movements and I don't think I'll ever do it, so now I post this piece as a stand-alone piece. In this work I employed melodies and motifs from two polish christmas carols - Jezus malusieńki (violin 1 & 2) and Mizerna cicha (viola). Hopefully the piece will be performed this Christmas
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https://youtu.be/XbNfbUn9YPY
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My first song, written to a poem by Leopold Staff (a polish poet). I didn't use the whole poem because it's too long.
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Two-part invention. My first "serious" invention written after analysis of Bach's two-part inventions.
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My first attempt to write a romantic piece. I hope it doesn't sound too much like Nocturne in f minor by Chopin
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This is my first piece in classical style. Do you think it sounds convincing?
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In measure 2, tenor (qui - Db) and bass (eis - Ab) - fourth is forbidden in two-part counterpoint, unless it's a suspension - you can change Db to D natural. Measure 4 is harmonically quite unclear for me - in general there is many situations where one voice has for example b natural and the other has b flat at the same time - the green countersubject combined with red subject are responsible for that (also green and purple). Parallel sevenths/seconds aren't always bad - it depends on the context. I think you should fix those errors and errors mentioned by others before you go further. Good luck!
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Sounds very nice to me, despite many counterpoint errors. I suggest you a key signature of 2 sharps - and it would be nice if the score was neater. Do you have any instruments in mind? I think you can develop this piece.
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In my opinion Allegro bars 8-10 are fine. The one think that bothers me is actually bar 3, the D in Violin 2 doesn't belong to the harmony
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I'm still not satisfied with my counterpoint, so I wrote these two little practice pieces. They're not mentioned for any instruments, but I had to choose something when making an mp3. Also, this is my first finished canon, that is I've written many canonical passages but this is my first standalone finished canon :D What do you think of these?
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Great classical duet! I liked the motivic imitation in allegro. I think the shape of the andante is really good, and to be honest I liked it more than the allegro. Also posting a score is a good idea, because it makes reviewing much easier
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Great! Beethoven is present here
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This is a piano concerto I am composing now. I will succesively post remaining movements. The second movement is a slow siciliano, in my feeling it's a bit too short but when I think what I could add, I don't have any ideas :/ what do you think?
