Thank you very much for the feedback
Yeah, I alway seem to struggle with dynamics so I´ll definetly work on that. Interesstingly enough I actually avoided creating movement in the piece on purpose attempting to create a kind of still water effect in the piece, I guess it´s my own fault for giving it an esoteric name which implies the complete opposite of what I was going for.
I actually watched the Sideways video before and used some of the techniques mentioned like quartal harmony.