Achromatism

hmm, not too bad. i would probably suggest some dynamics in volume for little percussive bits like the hats, especially near the beginning. interesting style for 0:25 onwards, but i do like what you did with the bass at around moments like 0:17.

pretty lovely. it seemed as if it'd be primarily a calm piece, but it gradually progressed into something more... weighty? ...and as it slowly progressed, it really grew on me. it seemed as if it progresses with you, even, in a very natural sort of way. so, ehm, yeah. incredibly satisfying. would love to see more like this.

overall, pretty great. i'm impressed by the progressions, what was initially just a bass rhythm seemed to end up being a very nice fundamental motif sprinkled around the composition, and yet it expanded in some nice ways through other strings. i'd probably say certain sections like 1:06 though 1:13 (nice way to peek that motif in, by the way!), as well as 2:20 through 2:35 were especially pretty appealing.