Moueen Issa

Thank you for your detailed comment! I agree that they both give the impression of incomplete, hurriedly-written pieces. Although preludes can be this short in general, but that shortness would require a sense of unity and completeness. This hurry and impatience manifest, I think, in some of the transitions as well.

Thank you so much for the advice!

Thanks for the feedback! In fact, I have similar thoughts as well. I like the second prelude more, and after I posted them and relistened I felt the end in both was abrupt and needed more preparation. Perhaps the final measure should have had the final chord in the third beat. I appreciate your listening and detailed analysis!

Hi, I've recently composed two short preludes for solo piano. I'd like to know your thoughts. Thank you in advance!

This is a short piano piece I composed. I hope you like it! https://youtu.be/Zc4xDN8tXZU

Im sorry...the mp3 file couldn't be uploaded...i dont know how to remove the post

Hi, this is a simple piano piece I have composed.

This is an incomplete piece I have composed. It is my first attempt of trying to compose jazz for piano. I hope you give me your opinion as well as advice on how to learn more about jazz piano.

Thank you a lot! Actually, I was imitating Mozart's style.

Thank you very much!

Of course!

This is a short piano piece I have composed. I hope you like it.

I meant if I deleted the stops, it wouldn't sound good (it would sound continuos and not in a good way I think). So I think I will have to delete some passages or replace them.

Thank you! Exactly. This is the thing that I and everyone who listened to it don't like. The problem is that if I changed this I would have to write it all over again.

I am writing my first sonata. This is just the bginning. I hope you listen and give me suggestions (listen until the music stops; the rest is draft).