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Moueen Issa

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  1. Thank you for your detailed comment! I agree that they both give the impression of incomplete, hurriedly-written pieces. Although preludes can be this short in general, but that shortness would require a sense of unity and completeness. This hurry and impatience manifest, I think, in some of the transitions as well.
  2. Thank you so much for the advice!
  3. Thanks for the feedback! In fact, I have similar thoughts as well. I like the second prelude more, and after I posted them and relistened I felt the end in both was abrupt and needed more preparation. Perhaps the final measure should have had the final chord in the third beat. I appreciate your listening and detailed analysis!
  4. Hi, I've recently composed two short preludes for solo piano. I'd like to know your thoughts. Thank you in advance!
  5. This is a short piano piece I composed. I hope you like it! https://youtu.be/Zc4xDN8tXZU
  6. Im sorry...the mp3 file couldn't be uploaded...i dont know how to remove the post
  7. Hi, this is a simple piano piece I have composed.
  8. This is an incomplete piece I have composed. It is my first attempt of trying to compose jazz for piano. I hope you give me your opinion as well as advice on how to learn more about jazz piano.
  9. Thank you a lot! Actually, I was imitating Mozart's style.
  10. This is a short piano piece I have composed. I hope you like it.
  11. I meant if I deleted the stops, it wouldn't sound good (it would sound continuos and not in a good way I think). So I think I will have to delete some passages or replace them.
  12. Thank you! Exactly. This is the thing that I and everyone who listened to it don't like. The problem is that if I changed this I would have to write it all over again.
  13. I am writing my first sonata. This is just the bginning. I hope you listen and give me suggestions (listen until the music stops; the rest is draft).
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