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A lovely pleasant piece of music. Remember woodwind players need to Breathe! Why the Oboe D'amore? Not many players own one. Why not substitute English Horn? I also think in this composition the tone would be more fitting. Mark

Hi I listen to the original piano work; although your orchestration is full of color and is well thought out and quite enjoyable. The orchestra version from my mind when compared to the piano is not as ethereal/light or distinct as the original piano version in feel. I guess orchestrating from piano is not easy at all. Mark

Once again very nice sounding work ....

Alex, this is a lovely work. My only observation/suggestion is all the doubling in the woodwinds. When playing with multiple persons tuning the octaves among the players takes a bit finesse. Mark

Not being a string player I can not add anything to the discussion. So I'll respond as a listener. It is a delightful work ... full of energy. It reminds me of French works at the turn of the century. Mark

I enjoyed your work .... a very pleasing work. I do have one observation wit the orchestration. Why the English Horn? In the Cacophony I feel it gets lost. Why not the French Horn instead? I also think it would add a bit more color. Mark

It's a "Jolly" good piece. My only suggestion is that the notes fall into a repetitious pattern with the range of middle B to G above the staff. The work hangs about the G. Plus the lyrical movement which it up linear and down linear is also repetitious. Once again the harmony is delightful and is the piano part. It would enhance the work with a mid-section with a different flavor with a bit of editing of the main theme.

As a listener ... just a fun piece! Mark

A very effective and engaging orchestration ... it possesses a well rounded tonal balance with interesting color. Nice work. Mark

Alex, Please aware that in measure 6 you have a slur in pp in the Oboe going to the B - Bb the Oboe's lowest note. Not a problem usually, however, at that dynamic level it might not work. At measure 16 you have the Oboe at the high F and G.... I don't see the benefit here at all. Not really recommended unless it is an avant garde work. In both cases the Oboist will not be happy with the orchestration. Mark

A lovely ... work. French impressionistic style with Lush harmonies ... inviting melodies. Well crafted in that it moves along gently and creates energy/anticipation in the same breath. Wonderful dialogue between the viola and piano. Kudos ... Mark

Alex 2 points: I assume your sore is in C. To transpose from English Horn in F to Oboe is a 5th up. If you review your English horn part that would put the Oboe in the mid-range. Secondly, you have the English horn play G above the staff ... not a low note. As per the Oboe and the problems with low notes ... which I would consider to be anything below a C#/Db you are correct. The amateurs and some semi-pro players might have difficulty attacking the notes with confidence and producing an initial soft attack and pleasant tone too. Personally, I practice daily producing soft attacks on the lower notes and I test my (handmade) reeds on such an attack. So much skill: air support, embouchure, coordination (tongue, breath, fingers) all impact on the low notes. So you I guess you have to know your players experience level. Now having said this .... I really don't like composers who do not appreciate and who write melodic lines etc. for Oboe without understanding the skill level needed and/or the context written for those low low low notes. Oboe is a challenging instrument ... one you both love and hate at times! And don't let me start on the reeds .............................. Mark

My reason for using the English horn, is that oboes can sound quite harsh and intrusive in their low range. A bit like a duck! So I thought an English horn would have a more pleasant timbre in that range. Alex this really is a misunderstanding of how an Oboe works! Let's throw out the meme about DUCKS! The lower range/register can be as beautiful as the upper range. (just ask Dvorak). The English horn in this orchestration will not add too much. It does not have the penetration ... it is better used a solo instrument or in a small ensemble. Please no more duck jokes! Mark

This is a very lovely work which reminds of the Poulenc Oboe Sonata The piano accompaniment is very effective. The initial theme lovely; however, a bit repetitious (even with the challenging piano movement underneath). From a technical point of view - no problem for the Oboist here. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9hgiP3XLKQ8&list=RD9hgiP3XLKQ8&start_radio=1

Hi Alex, Very interesting harmony and movement. My only comment is the orchestration: Instead of doubling for example the Oboes why not give the second Oboe the English Horn line. Similarly, I would also move the Bass Clarinet to the one of the Bassoons. I don't really feel you need the need them in the orchestration. Mark