Tom Cass

This is a piece which I composed for my project, I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on what you think.

Thanks so much for the reply I'll give that a look now.

Hi my name is Tom and I've set up this topic so people can freely discuss amateur compositions that people are willing to share. I am studying music and am still very amateur but I was hoping to learn more by being a part of this forum and would invite others to submit their compositions for the same reason. I will attach my SoundCloud at the bottom and would appreciate any feedback, thank you. https://soundcloud.com/user-560723495