Hey thank you very much for the feedback!! (First English isnt my mothertongue so PLS tell me if u dont understand something) I think I understand What you are critisizing, is that its hard to do "space" music and i shouldnt use some cinematic sounding stuff bc thats not what defines space.
Ofc everybody can define or imagine how space is sounding by themselves. And I agree, we are just one of this tiny points floating through an unreal huge space, universe. Thats why I tried to just create some soundscape, (i guess thats what u meant in the beginning of the song) to capture somehow this feeling.
I understand if your asking, why adding piano and stuff? Thats not what space defines. Why didnt I let the sound just speak for itself.
So Im reffering now to the title "Solar System". Our Solar System is sooo small, useless and really unnecessary and insignificant in comparison how small we are and how big our galaxy, our universe, is.
Sooo small, and still. Here we are, on the only dust ball we know, with those incredible small chances of life. (Im not saying there doesnt exist any other life outside there), but still. In relation to this gigantic mess around us, we are something special, because we are existing.
Thats why you first here some "space sound" only what I imagine matches or how i would describe how space is sounding. And then later I added some calm, wide Melodies, some Music.
Because in this Solar System all you can here in this piece IS out of it. Every single tone, is existing. In our Solar System on our Little Meaningless Ball. Thats whats bizarre and also beautiful, and that is what i wanted to express with this music. Thats What makes Space Emotional (for me).
I tried to keep it small, simple, and wide. I dont have much mid, only some base and highs. The piano is mainly plaing octaves. There are 2 instruments, piano and strings (Violine). I tried, not to do big orchestral music but somehow keeping those space feelings in the music.
So ofc I can also understand ur point, that it shouldnt be orchestrated. And thx for your feedback, I hope you also understood the background of this now maybe a little bit different.
Can Space really be expressed, Without Music?