Thank you for listening! those are great pointers, I will definitely go back and revise those muddy places. Having that low B is weird and something I could’ve avoided, but I think it brings a neat unexpectedness. When I go to play it, it definitely is a unique experience lol. Thank you again
Thank you for this comment! Finding the best voicings is definitely a weak point for me. I originally wrote it like this in an attempt to make it very boomy and dark, but I think you’re right, more clarity and neatness would really improve it. Thank you again for the pointers, this definitely helps
Hello! I wanted to come on here and share my first completed composition. Any thoughts or suggestions would be much appreciated. I play cello myself and this was really fun to write.