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Oh I see your point! Yea I also feel it's muddy now and have changed it a little bit. Well for the ending, lemme think about it and leave it open for now. Thanks again!

Thanks a lot Peter! Indeed the ending is not good as I just cut it off, feel like it’s not the end but I’m lack of inspiration then🤣. Not sure about the muddy sounding thing, which part do you mean?

Hi I'm new here. Any advice is welcome! This work is actually trying to describe the workdays and the weekends so it's kinna funny to me..Hope you enjoy it and thanks for listening.Busy B.mp3