Moonstar Unknown

@Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Omg, thanks so much for the response! Forgive me, I’m still beginning to learn how this app works so I can’t make as fancy of a reply as you did yet, but hopefully I’ll pick it up pretty quickly! Since I can’t make the little red boxes, I’m just going to label the different sections if that’s okay. 1) I’m so glad you enjoy the music! I get what you mean about the strings (to be honest, I was thinking the same thing) but I’m wondering if you have any ideas about how to do it. Like should I keep the strings pretty similar harmonically to go with the melody and then just add more complex rhythm and movement within the strings? 2) I also see what you mean about the piano playability and I will definitely look at that pretty soon. That’s something I really need to work on myself because I tend to write music that is probably impossible, to be honest. So yea I will definitely look at that. 3) I’m also alto, I think. It’s interesting, because it really depends on the day. Some days I’m better with higher notes and some days I’m better with lower notes, and so I definitely want to look into why that is so I can find ways to increase my range on a specific day without having to rely on how my voice is on a certain day. Hopefully that’s helpful, and not confusing. But yea, overall just wanted to say thank you for the feedback because I never get this kind of feedback on my music! I’m the best composer I know irl, and the people on flat don’t really give a ton of attention towards my music, so I really appreciate the critical thought towards my music. But yea, hope these responses helped!

Hey so I know I haven’t like, ever talked here, but here I am now! I have a song that I just wrote recently (I use flat btw). This song is called “Lovely Spring Afternoon” and it’s kinda a catchy jazzy lyrical so I suppose it goes here…? Just wanted to share, so let me know what you think and I will gladly accept feedback! Also, do you have any advice for if I were to sing this, because I’ve never like officially sung before, but I kinda can sing, so if you have any advice for that do let me know! I appreciate anything you can offer, even if that’s only nice words that’s wonderful☺️ Lovely Spring Afternoon by Moonstar Unknown