Hello @Samuel_vangogh,
First of all thank you for leaving a comment, I appreciate both positive qualifiers and constructive criticism!
Indeed, I agree with you that it is a bit confusing. Although I have to admit that this was my first intention, I am attracted to ambiguous writing (for example, the first two notes of the triplet in bar 10 can be practically interpreted as two eighth notes in binary subdivision). Still, if it's too confusing for the interpreter I'll try to change it. Anyway, that's just a sketch, when I finish the other poem, I'll reupload both of them together in one whole video.
Claudio