Hello there everyone!
I have begun the process of attempting to create my first sonata. Now, this is a very naieve venture, as I've only been studying piano since January/February. This has been on my own time, so far, and recently the ABA form popped up. I felt that this was very suitable to my tastes, and started thinking of programmatic things I might make music based on. As per my own so-far-developed musical taste and style, I will tell you what this planned sonata MEANS to me!
To get an idea, I must tell you at first that the key G minor is associated with me to the colour green. It is a dark green, and it sounds like a deep forest, with the undergrowth of hundreds of years covering its floor. Barely any sun gets through this dense, vaguely European mess of trees. In this quiet wood, a massive battle is centered between two nations in crisis and at war. It is the last desperate push of one to conquer the other, and one to stay alive. The entire sonata is based off of this theme.
The plan was that each theme in the exposition should represent one of the nations in crisis. There will be no modulation from G minor to D major, though, as both nations are to be represented as stretched thin and at the breaking point. My idea is to move from G minor to B-flat minor (which I associate with jet black and darkness) through a bridge passage, after firmly establishing the tonic theme. Thereafter I would like to fall into the development, which I want to become a whirlwind of action and movement, con brio. The recapitulation will be left triumphant yet with something.. lingering. Movement II should become adagio, representing a long, cold winter. III will be the end.. and I'm not sure how, but I must do this!
I am not asking for you to write my sonata, of course. This being my very first work, I want to make it simple yet methodical. Perhaps it is not enough that there are 20 bar lines actually worked up to, but that is all the challenge. I had an idea in my head a few hours ago for what to do after this, but it crumbled after the idea of themes of war crept in and made its mark.
All I ask for is that someone look the intro over (yes, it is short, but writer's block comes at mysterious times!), listen to the .MUS if they can, and tell me where it might go, from a technical view. As an aside, I've never had piano or music lessons, and since January all I have learned has been from studying (METHODICALLY) through books and the internet. I have not taken composition yet, either, as I am fresh out of High School.
Thank you for stomaching my large post, if you have. :)
20 Bars in and Gaining Ground.MUS
[20 Bars in and Gaining Ground.MUS].pdf