Thank you both for your feedback. I used a mobile program called Maestro to make this on my phone. Peter, I know what you mean about the pauses and they are intentional, but sound very strange and abrupt when played without interpretation. And Henry, yes this piece is insaley hard and I wouldn't expect anyone to take the time to learn it. I'm learning liszts mephisto waltz right now and I think my piece might be even harder that that. I agree with all the slightly negative things too and I've noticed the mistakes in the piece since I finished in over the sunmer and gained more musical maturity since then. I'm cooking up a ballade right now I'll probably have it done in a month.