Eric N

Hello @PeterthePapercomPoser Thanks for you feed back, here is a sample with pedal. Needs a little bit more adjustment though I've yet to master music software to do all these effects.

Thanks all for the feedback, one occasional issue I've been having is meandering, too many musical ideas in one piece and no obvious form. I don't think I've had this issue in this above composition but below is a good example where I have meandered. I'll try recomposing this piece again and ask for feedback to confirm if the form is sound.

Hello everyone This is my first post here I am hoping to get some reviews / feedback on one of my piano compositions. I'm a self taught pianist and I learnt music mostly through listening to and doing cover of other pieces. I would like to take my compositions to the next level but I feel my skills have plateaued somewhat, it's hard to figure what's missing or what could be improved on my own. This is my latest piece and is roughly where I am in terms of overall skill. Thanks !