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  1. Thank you so much for the kind words, and for the constructive criticism! Music definitely is a great way to keep your mind fresh and relieved after the pain of science lol. I do really like writing those "eargasmic" parts as you put it - can't deny that I love grand orchestral moments, especially as a horn player. Didn't quite mean to mimic Beethoven, but he definitely is an inspiration along with many late Romantic era composers (Mahler especially, as a horn player should be). For example, the part where everything seems to fall apart and die down was meant to be similar to Tchaik's Romeo and Juliet scene where Tybalt is mortally wounded. I will admit it was quite hard deciding what was over the top and what wasn't, especially because I wanted to use everything an orchestra had to offer. But, I still think I can work on those softer moments, choosing when is best to double up parts and when is best to leave the music to fewer musicians and achieve the same results. I think the score would reveal that many instruments are often playing at the same time, and while it blends pretty well in this mp3, my worry would be how it sounds with a real orchestra. As you stated with heavy distortion, a lot can be hidden here and blended but I'm just worried that blending is allowing me to make some rookie mistakes and get away with it. Regarding the motifs, I was definitely working with "shorter" melodies that would disappear and reappear at various little points like "Where's Waldo". The trumpet bit at the beginning, for example, is meant to represent the King himself, although I agree it could be longer or more fleshed out to fully capture the "might" of the scene. The bassoon/oboe combo in the softer sections was also the princess theme, if you were wondering. But again, can definitely be made more apparent. Thank you again, and I'll see with later work what I can do to improve!
  2. My apologies, forgot to add it the first time. Score is attached here.
  3. I'm pretty new to all of this, mostly having fun with composition while I apply to medical school. This is the first big piece I tried to write, some errors here and there with some questionable passages, but I'm overall happy with it. Very open to criticism as I hope to improve this piece and others I hope to write as a way to ward off application anxiety. Main idea of the piece: it's about the death of Henry II of France at his daughter's wedding. The beginning is meant to be a little chaotic but joyous because it represents the many people of France, both of high and low standings, gathering for this momentous occasion (imagine flying over the castle and seeing the many people walking around, preparing things). The softer part afterward is meant to represent the princess as she readies herself for the festivities, including the jousting. Bell tolls signify the beginning of the joust, with everyone being summoned to watch the event. Once things become faster, imagine the knights galloping at each other, lances ready to unsaddle their opponent. The King is one of these knights, excited to take part in a sport he loves. The tension builds as the joust becomes quite dangerous, until the unthinkable happens and the King is launched off his horse, a part of his lance protruding from his visor. The uneasiness and sadness that follows portrays the people as they become worried about not only the King's health (as he will soon perish), but also the fate of France as the King's young son will claim the throne without any experience and proper guidance.
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