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Hi everyone, I finished a new piano piece called Cloud Ame and wanted to share. I hope you enjoy listening and welcome any feedback! Thank you

hi @AngelCityOutlaw, thanks for listening and for your feedback! By sudden rests, do you mean measures 32-38?

Hi @Kvothe Thank you for your kind comment! That is very interesting it reminds you of Scott Joplin. I can hear it a little now that you point it out. One of my favorite pieces to play is Maple Leaf Rag!

A piano piece I wrote called Lazy Day. I think I could've elaborated more in some sections but overall fits the theme of the song 😄 Looking for feedback on the piano score as I know notation is not my strong suite. Thanks in advance & hope you enjoyed listening! Lazy Day Score.pdf

hi @PeterthePapercomPoser thank you for the feedback as always! I agree with you it should be cut-time. No wonder it felt a little strange.. haha. I use a combination of Musescore and Dorico.

Hello! I finished a new piano song that I had fun playing and started as a sketch last summer. I'm happy to finish it! I hope you enjoy ~

hi @PeterthePapercomPoser, thank you for your constructive feedback and thank you for explaining how to figure out the meter again! I keep getting it wrong xD I'm working on my next summer piece and am already confused on what the meter should be. For the ending of Star Away, I was going for a something fading away in the far distance. 🙂 I would love to try making lo-fi music one day, but I have no experience with beats as you can probably tell from my struggle with meters 😅

Hi, I finished a new composition called Star Away. I chose an electric piano sound this time because I found it more fitting. Hope you enjoy listening! Updated to 3/4

Hi @PeterthePapercomPoser! Thank you for your feedback! Are there any tricks to help determine which time signature to use? It wasn't obvious to me when I was notating it. I picked 4/4 because of the way the melody seemed to flow when I play it. Thanks in advance Kaiyun

Hello, This is a piano piece I finished recently for Valentines last month. I hope you enjoy! Kaiyun

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it! I want to compose more this year 😄

Hi everyone, this is a rather simple piece. I hope you enjoy ~

hi @PeterthePapercomPoserand @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu thank you for the kind comments!! I agree with both of you - ritardando, tonal, relaxing cafe, looping melodies are what I have in mind. I'm glad the same ideas and feelings come across! it's really nice to get feedback on this forum for improvement and a small confidence boost 🚀 I'm going to keep up with making more sketches, and pick a few of the best ones to share and develop !!

hi, I've been working on a simple jazzy tune. Looking for feedback and tips on how to end this piece. I am so close to finishing but can't find the right ending as usual... 🙂 I am thinking to repeat the beginning melody with a slight variation and hopefully land on an ending I like? Thanks in advance!

@PeterthePapercomPoser and @Thatguy v2.0 Thanks I appreciate the genuine feedback! You both hit the spot. I am writing short piano sketches as practice, and am treating them as a "piano diary" 🙂 If I stumble across a melody I really like, then I make more efforts to complete it. It's easy for me to start a new melody, but for some reason it's so difficult to build upon and finish. I don't know why, I always get stuck after a few measures.. My goal is to practice improvising weekly to get better at composing, then hopefully make sheet music and full videos 🙂