First Question, How long have you been composing, and how old are you?(if you dont mind me asking), so the begining seems a bit random to me, and the Flute solo at mm.55 needs to be brought out if you want it heard.
I do like some of the rhythm's you have here, but the quarter-eighth melodies get kinda boring, but I can see some call and response, id like to hear some of your future works.