Rafael Avila

Yeah that chord i was wanting to change in bar 14. As for experimenting with rhythm I sorta kept it simple just cuz I don't really have lots of experince playing this type of music. Right now I'm learning Schoenburgs op11 so hopefully some of his ideas rub off on me. I usually write what I can play but even still I think I could've added triplets or sixteenth notes at the least to vary it. I'll see about adding more experimentation in terms of rhythm.

Hi this is a piano piece I'm working on, it's almost done and needs some touching up. It uses a set. Would love feedback and thoughts on it.

Yeah that was the idea to start off tonally with this piece then in the next one move away from the tonal center. Overall thanks for the comment.

Hello this piece is one that I wrote which was basically a framework to develop the idea of moving away from tonality. By having this piece clearly in a minor, then the next one become more tonally ambiguous but at the end, finish it off in a minor. Here's the midi to the score https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/6d7c913ce1d371fae8da86c644342048c5f206ae