hmm, well thank you for the comments. I truly don't know what to say in reply though (well, i'm used to constructive criticism by now, so I'll try to use this to address such issues brought forth of this "composition", and work for improvement), although I will bring forth a better effort for next time. As for everything sounding midi, that can be partly attributed to the fact that I was unable to notate it in Finale, as I had originally intended, so I used soundfonts and vsti with FL Studio for the instruments, which may not have been the best idea for this "composition". In truth, the chords were originally meant to be played by an accoustic guitar, but I decided at the last minute to do so on a piano...I'm still not sure why myself...Of course I'll continue my studies, but I'll also work through trial and error for improvement (as brought forth, based on this "composition", clearly I still have many errors to correct), although I will state that I didn't "just find notes on my keyboard and use them"...i...used my guitar, ;D (well, for the beginning part for the piano at least).
Once again, thank you for your comments.