Hey this is a newer piece I am currently working on for my Technoir Project.
I need some comments on it, how it makes you feel, possible things I can do to improve it.
Disregard the last 10 seconds plan on changing the melody and taking it somewhere different.
Well here it is. I wanted to convey, dark sci fi fantasy urban action with gothic and technological resonances.
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Thanks,
-Harrow