@JijGaat
I am perplexed, what attitudes? I don't understand, can u explain where I was "wrong"?
I'll say it again, and with some justification. I don't intend to improve this piece, not because I am some "great" composer who has mastered the form. Nor am i looking down on people, thinking you guys are no help to me. No, that's not the reason. I merely want to learn, and get things right on my own. PLUS, i don't believe there are "right" or "wrong" notes. There might be "better" notes, but even that is relative. So i simply don't need people telling me what to do.
What i find interesting is in people's direct response, not so much their musical analysis of my score. Art should be instantly appealing, if it's not, then it's not good enough.