frantz,
Excuse my english please!
Id liked your piece, it clearly on barroque style wich is music that I love. I think a more italian barroque. (remained me Scarlatti)
Harmonicly and contrapuntually is in the style, But, (It only my opinion) if I wish to compose a barroque piece, i should paid atention especially to the phrases.
For example:
In the 15 second, I hear clearly the end of the first pharse, which is constructed on the V chord.
Some how I need a little space to breath.
Then, it can be said that in second 22 it hapens again. A little breath is needed.
So, structarly the first 55 sec its like A . In homophonic music you can say that an A or part of music its constructed because the development of phrases, each one built up with the development of the first motive. (the first 3 seconds of your piece)
So if i hear the first A, I can hear 2 big pharses. Then the A its repeated. The rest of the piece is less clearly structuraly.
On the other hand, if you are self tought then you have a gift i have to say.
The book of schoemberg: 'Fundamentals-Musical-Composition'
(which i havent finished) is the best book i found on these matter. (phrases)
I hope I ve helped you with my point of view.
Thanks frantz your your music!
Bruno