I just finished a pop song with a piano part and I'm gonna sumbit the lyrics for u guys to critique. I wrote the melody first and thought it sounded kinda sad and a bit angry so i thought aha! sad love song! lol  
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Piano Intro 
Verse 1 
When my heart was torn 
Burning with regret and shame 
Couldn't help but mourn 
I'd been conned into the same old game 
These tears won't dry away 
My whole world crashed today 
I have one thing to say 
I will be ok 
Chorus 
My memories are distant spirits 
Calamity, a story untold 
No one will know of my troubles 
This hushed event will cease to unfold 
And knows the time I think to myself 
Why do i care so much anyway? 
I find that there is no reason 
So now's the time to Stop. 
You're Erased 
Short piano solo 
Verse 2 
Ooo a new day 
And i start to contemplate 
Figment of my mind 
Notice? Left my heart behind. 
What tears? There's none today 
My whole world is ok 
There's one thing left to say 
I have found my way 
Chorus repeated 
Bridge 
Life 
Beautiful 
Life  
Calm and still 
Instrumental 
Modulated Chorus 
Ooo Gone 
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Piano outro 
There we go , all i have to do now is figure out how to get a recording onto here. I'm never good at those technological kind of things...  
  :)