I find this it an interesting piece, a wellexecuted, mild and calm 11 minutes. Very enjoyable.
The velocity is a little low all over, and it does not add to the dynamics.
Haha, well it explodes on occassion, yes i noticed now.... But those glimpses would sound better with better levels in the mix.
Anyway, nice themes and composition. NOw the ending:
Its sublime, man! Like it very much.