meister hubert

Hi there,I am right now totally into new classics and often I have to compensate that by writing short classical pieces. This is one of them. The idea came yesterday while I was fiddling around at the piano and had allways this melody in my head (which is awfull, if you try at the same moment to develop an atonal melody^^)The only way to get it out of my head? Write it down! Anyone here with the same problems? =PHope you enjoy, maybe I'll add a score laterArmin Invention in D-Minor

Well it should work, at least I can open the score. Please try it again Thanks Armin

Hi there,I recorded yesterday a Lied of mine. It was a concert from the students of my piano teacher. I performed there my Lied "Wie des Mondes Abbild zittert" with a friend (he's the singer). Unfortunally we had just half an hour to practise, because we are both very busy right now. So the recording isn't that good, but you get the idea....The Poem is from Heinrich Heine (You probably don't know him, he is very famous in Germany. Schumann, Schubert and Brahms used a lot of his poems)This Song is part of a Song Cycle I am working on right nowHere is the recording:http://vimeo.com/24043496EnjoyArmin Wie des Mondes Abbild zitter (Lied) [mp3=meister hubert][/mp3]

Thanks for your opinion. I thought about a change in the contrasting middle section in the accompaniment, but I am not quiet sure yet. But this would maybe fix the repetitive-issue? I don't speak english very well, but I try my best to give a translation: On the green grass, there is grazing this one: a cow, a cow! It's heart is full of longings and there are swimming tears, From time to time, from time to time. What it likes it eats with it's mouth, stomachs it and makes muh! and makes muh! Dreaming and moving it's mouth it looks stupid around, just like you, just like you. I know this one is a bad translation and it doesn't make sense, but you hopefully got n impression of the poem

Hi there,this is a Lied about a cow (a sad one lol)I don't have a recording yet, but hopefully you'll like it=)It is supposed to be sung by a Tenor.Armin Die Kuh (the cow)

Hi there,I wrote this "Lied" (Song), inspired by Schubert. I am listening at the moment to quiet a lot of his work (Love the Winterreise) and wanted to write a Lied as well.I took a poem from Hermann Hesse (had to be German, to be true Schubert-Style) and this is the result:Der BriefThe poem means roughly translated something like:I am not worried about the letter you wrote. You say you don't love me anymore, but your letter is so long. Twelve pages, you wouldn't write so much if you did not love me anymore.I am working on a recording and on the rest of the poem-cycle. But it still might take some time.So long, hope you are looking forward to the recordingArmin Der Brief (the Letter)

The score is now available!

Hey thanks very much guys! Maybe you convince me to make a sonata But first I have to finish other pieces as I said, I still go to school (have quiet a lot of stuff to do) and I need to practice more piano^^ Score will be finished within this week Armin

Hey guys. Cheers for your kind words! I like Beethoven very much, so thats fine for me :cool: I am not gong to make a Sonata it doesn't really has the right form for that. It's more some kind of variations about the theme you hear in the beginning. The score will take a little while, maybe 1 or 2 more weeks, because I have to finish some more important work. Armin hones:

Hi there,I didn't post here for quiet a while so this is probably not the best piece to celebrate my comeback here^^It doesn't have any form or stile, but it has lots of modulations and a nice theme.I'm looking forward to hear your opinions.The piece is recorded with a Steinway C and Rode microphones, the score will follow later (I am not too sure about some notations right now.)Enjoy =) Piano piece i d-minor

Doesn't play for me either. The score looks wired: Is it dorian? You start of with octaves, then the standard C-major comes,, but then: b,c,e? The whole piece also is mainly homophonic, maybe that is going to be a bit boring after a while. But I don't want to judge about the piece until I've heard it (And I am to lazy to take it to a quite place, take the time and listen to it in my head or to play it at the piano ) Armin

Thank you guys! I'll have a look at these bars and at the end, because I asked my teacher. He said, the exposition is supposed to and in the key of the second theme :rolleyes: But maybe I'll leave it, cause then it is special:P Armin

Doesn't sound like the worst in the world I really like it, there some parts which are not that great, but there are a few veeery lovely parts! Overall very good work!!!

Thanks for your reply jaime and thanks for the kind words, too :) By the way, I called the piece "sonata", but I just meant "sonata form". I don't know, why I use minor so often, maybe I just like it more then major :P It's funny that you mention a "Schubertian effect" because the first two bars are from Schubert. As you also said - Sonatas modulate to the dominant - so does mine. Have a look at bar 25. There starts my second theme. It's in C-major, but I know, after a few moments I am again in minor :lol: I read the wikipedia (yes I know.. :unsure: ) article about sonatas and it said that in the exposition there is supposed to be a kind of uncertain feeling about the key or something like that. So should the exposition end again in F-major? That'd be no problem :) Or C-major? I really didn't get it. And thanks for the advice with Mozart, maybe he'll be able to encourage me to write in major :facepalm: Thanks very much! Armin

Hi,this is a homework for school.We had to write 4+4 Bars and we got 2 Bars to continue. I don't know, how these are called in english, maybe someone could help here: (4+4 Bars) (2+2+4 Bars)So what I did: I made 8+8 Bars. And the 8 Bars separate into 2+2+4. And the 4 in 1+1+2.So very complicated ;)After I finished it, I thought "Oh thats nice, let's make a sonata"So I started and made the exposition. I don't know whether it's right, so I thought I just ask before I continue writing.I have first the theme. Then I am modulating to the 5th. Then I have the second theme. Then I have the end-part and then a repetition.Hope also, you like it.All criticism is welcome and any other suggestions as well!Cheers!Armin Exposition