Hey there,
I think that I am still searching for my voice as a composer...it is kind of a hard thing to do. I enjoy trying new techniques but I really have difficulty with some "modern" music, or advant garde music...i feel that it doesn't communicate and music is a form of communication for me. However, yes, the piece is a little outdated. I don't apologize at all for the film music influence. I want to go into film scoring, plus, I think film music is sort of a link between the lay person and classical music. If you ask anyone to whistle a John Williams tune I bet they could do it...ask them to whistle a Shoenberg tune and no go. So I guess I am sort of a "populist" in that sense.
My engraving skills leave much to be desired, Finale often gets on my nerves and so I put up with a medoicre score. However, this piece I was still printing off parts the morning before rehearsels started so i was in a hurry!!
Don't be fooled by my bio...it is a little misleading about my age. I am actually 24 so I probably should actually be a lot more advanced than I am...anyways
Keep the criticism coming! I take all of your suggestions into consideration and appreciate them as I work on becoming a better composer!