Benjamin Lines

I can just play a high E on clarinet

How do you think i could get better, I would love to be able to write a meaningful and serious love pop song some day. Any advice about learning or what books to get? (i live in the UK) Thanks for the critisism guys and hope you can give me more sometime soon :) PS. If i manage to get this performed someday do you think it would be better cause of the realistic sounds and such.

mitche, when are you writing the song for your lyrics? I will be glad to give you some help and will be interested in the final piece :happy:

Chris Hurn, how does cakewalk work then? I am interested in this program and am wondering if it is difficult to use?

which is better finale or sibelius?

piano_player18, i have enjoyed listening to part of your piece (i will listen to the rest later). I enjoyed the piece around 70-80 bars in. i agree matusleo, its hard to find your style in this piece, it sort of sounds to me like a mixture of church, classical and complete free form. I will review more tomorrow!

I might not be an amzing writter for songs but when i like some lyrics i can honestly say i like them AND i like your lyrics alot! Well Dun M8

Hi everyone! Im 16 years old and am not very good at composing, i have joined this forum to get help to get better. Anyway here are 2 of my pieces that i composed about a year ago and would really like some critisism. The special occasion piece was written for my parents silver aniversary which is taking place in a few years. The remebered person piece was written about a friend who left my life, at the start there is sadness but towards the end there is more hope. Thanks !! ;) Remembered_Person__Film_music_.mid Speciel_Occassion.mid