This is a tone poem that I have written based on the following poem, taken from the 1861 Fleurs Du Mal by Charles Baudelaire. The Poem title is L'albatros.
The Albatross
Often, to amuse themselves, the men of a crew
Catch albatrosses, those vast sea birds
That indolently follow a ship
As it glides over the deep, briny sea.
Scarcely have they placed them on the deck
Than these kings of the sky, clumsy, ashamed,
Pathetically let their great white wings
Drag beside them like oars.
That winged voyager, how weak and gauche he is,
So beautiful before, now comic and ugly!
One man worries his beak with a stubby clay pipe;
Another limps, mimics the cripple who once flew!
The poet resembles this prince of cloud and sky
Who frequents the tempest and laughs at the bowman;
When exiled on the earth, the butt of hoots and jeers,
His giant wings prevent him from walking.
(English Translation by William Appleby)
In the piece I have used a simple 4-bar theme to represent the Albatross. It starts in the piccolo soaring high at the start, then it expands into a continued soary wind thing. Flute choir make up clouds, and as the Albatross flies lower the instrument representing it becomes lower - first Cor Anglais, then bassoon. Following this, the albatross catches sight of the ship, with the definitive ship horn sounding from the Low brass. This is followed by the section in which the crew capture the bird, here the chromatic winds and harp represent the bird, and the brass sailor melody represents...well...the sailors. Following this, the Albatross falls to the ground, and its theme is heard in the tuba and contrabassoon. This is accompanied by trombone glissandi which are like the laughing of the sailors. Eventually they let it go, and once again, it flies off, but this time in a lower key, still not quite having shaken off the taunts of the crew of the ship. However, things pick up again, and the Maestoso shows that it is better than the crew. (Or at least the poet is better than the crew - or should be).
Time taken to compose - Just over 1 week (this is unusually long for me)
Problems encountered: Yes, awkward ranges of winds which I didn't know before, semiquavers, writing in a slightly atonal style at times. Also writing music to a story of sorts is diffficult.
Qm.MID