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  1. Hey guys thanks for all the comments I agree that time is the best song. I think I want to pursue that one in terms of seeing what I can do with it. When it was played at the spring concert it was pretty amazing. I guess for the other songs, I wanted to keep the same "type" of music as the time piece and it ended up being all the same in a way. i don't want to change them so they are so different but they do seem to have the same template. Since someone said that the ending of time could have been better, I think the full song has a better ending. The piece was cut b/c it was too long when it was performed. Time-Full.nwc Time.mid Time-Cut.mid Time-Cut.nwc
  2. hey I worked hard on these I just want some feedback or advice (good or bad) I see another thread 50 ppl looked at but no one posted??!?!
  3. Hi there I composed a group of songs in a suite called Time. Here are the finished ones. The song 'time' was played last spring at my high school concert. It was cool to hear it in real life rather than the midis. I have the real version but i can't upload mp3s here so if you want to hear it just let me know and I can send it :D thanks Far Away.mid Past.mid The Greatest Day.mid The Last Year.mid The Passing Hours.mid Time-Cut.mid
  4. Well I agree with both of you and I think this piece should have been in the experimental section cuz honestly, that's what it was. I didn't randomly pick 7/4 and I have played in it before but it did get weird in some parts. I admit this piece is confusing, but I wouldn't (and I'm not saying you did) say all that stuff on one piece that I wrote because it was very diiferent from what I usually do. I really wasn't into this as much as I was with other songs but I don't know, I thouhgt it could go somewhere but it didn't. I think a player would be interested to play a piece like this, even though it is hard but its very different. I think it would be a fun to play around song not a performance song. I hope I didn't come off as this is my style because it's not I just want to tell you. N.S. Canzano you have reviewed some of my other songs, your right I do have to study up because I feel like a new comer (and I am) surrounded by a bunch of people who are proffessional. All I want is for music to be music, not too technical, because if it was then it wouldn't be enjoyable to me as much as it used to be. I mean it's good that my music is getting out ther and being critiqued, as long as it doesn't ruin the fact that it is music and just music. This piece didn't really have much inspiration or much soul so it was ok that you guys really drove it into the ground.
  5. Piece Redone OK I split the piece into 4 mvmnts and redid the melodies and stuff here they are conversation.txt Mashup.MID satz1.pdf Mvmnt_I.mid Mvmnt_II.mid Mvmnt_III.mid Mvmnt_IV.mid
  6. violin sonata.MID Here is a new song that I justg finished, I'd say it took me like a month, and the hardest part was the harmonizing and gettng in a good melody, it's kind of like a song that just came to mind, no big inspiration, its a slow song for 2 violins a viola and cello Quartet_3.mid
  7. Hey everyone, I am having a hard time figuring out what to categorize my pieces in. Some people have told me modern but I'm not sure. Here are a few to listen to eragos.mid Entrance to Arian City.MUS Waltz Op.10 No4.mid Inspiration.mid The_Underground_Trail.mid Alegr_a.mid
  8. OK Mike here you go Goal/Inspiration of composition - To write a song that is different than anything/not really any inspiration, just came to me 2. How long it took to compose the piece - around 2 weeks, on and off 3. Obstacles when composing - Harmonizing parts 4. Summary of overall piece - kind of mysterious/weird/sci-fi kind of song with weird and hard fingerings and flats (in D Flat Major)
  9. Hey I'm back with a new song!! It's weird but comments and constructive criticizm is welcome. I haven't named it yet but any suggestionsa are ok too. (It's 2 Violins, a Viola and a Cello)Points, Lines, and Spikes.sib Finished_Song.mid
  10. Exercice pour forum2.midHere is a duet w/ 2 violins leave commentsAllegro_Duet.mid
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    Demeter

    08.03.05.midDemeter.mid
  12. 3 String Quartets that I really like, you don't have to though :) The 1st one is kind of strange but it's fun The_Lost_Temple.mid The 2nd one takes a while to get into the melody, but the melody is my favorite Volkslied_het_Rijk.mid The 3rd one has 4 solos-each violin (2), viola and cello, kind of suspense, weird type theme I guess Drowned_Ideas.mid Inspiration.mid Quartet_2.mid The_Underground_Trail.mid
  13. Freehold_Fight_piano.MIDHey it was there, it dissapeared, this site is weird like that lolMeloncholy_Melody.mid
  14. I think it is suppose to make u cringe
  15. I expected that :D this was when i guess u could say an experimental writer, not really giving intese thought in the songs, but I am currently writing a song that is similar to this (kind of dark) so it should be better
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