M is D: Thanks for the advice. I am actually a pianist and find writing for strings kind of uncomfortable. When I have that motif with a single note then the two notes in fifths above it, would it be more idiomatic to write the double stop on the first note instead of the second?
And I dont really understand what you mean by the slur thing. Whenver I slur two equal notes, it usually is a tie and I just write is that way to make it easier to read. And if your talking about measure 9, what I wrote there isn't meant to be a bowing, but a slurr and the violinist can bow it however is easiest to them.