rajordahl

The chords are interesting in this short sample , but where is the melody?

Re " Beware the Forest"s Mushrooms ": Very witty! Do I hear traces of Grieg's " In the Hall of the Mountainking?"

Hi 555- I began composing at about your age, and made similar mistakes. May I advise you to seek some professional advice?- not only in compositional matters, but in starting a listening program. I didn't get any real help until years later when I was in college.