Hey that was interesting!
First to say, your guitar sounds a bit to raw and ruff. I think you should deal more with the recording process and techniques.
I like the harmonies, they flow. They remind me of some songs of a bend from Serbia called Smak. And there is a nice part that hears like Piazolla.
I like your ideas. But I must say that you have to do more with dynamic of a song. A part, and repeated A part must be stronger then the rest if you know what I mean. Like in jazz, when a theme is played.
It is interesting, I like your harmonies, but would love to here some melodic minor or whole tone or bop notes! That would make it a bit more jazz.
All in all, it is brave and that's good!